Chapter 16 can be read HERE
. I am pretty sure that, as with chapter 12, I have misjudged the overall tone and ventured into slapstick territory here. Tried to do a sort of triangular layout in the first panel to lead the eye across the action, but ran afoul of the limited amount of horizontal space available to me, so tried the same thing to a lesser extent in the third panel - originally that sound effect was much bigger and connected the two figures, but I reduced the size because it made it look like it was a thunderclap or something.
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